Thursday, September 15, 2011

one word

8 comments:

  1. I like this! But it think it should be more rounded

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  2. I like this quote, but it doesn't really give a big emphasis on the word "round".

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  3. I could not find your personal quote so i am going to comment on this. i like where you're going with this but i definitely think it should be more spherical and rounded. the font is simple so it goes perfect with the word 'round' but the flow and curvieness of it makes it awkward because 'round' is not the first word that comes to mind.

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  4. i think that this word should be rounder to make the word itself look like what it is saying..

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  5. I can see where your going but i think it should be more rounded.

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  6. its good but i think you should make it rounder

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  7. I could not find your personal quote so I will comment on this. I probably sound like a broken record but you need to make the actual shape of the text more rounded. Good effort, just keep working on it.

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  8. I like this but it needs to be more round

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